I would like to lodge a complaint about your company. It is disappointing to point out the poor service that I was playing the online game of your company. The game I play was called”HBOline”.
First, we found that the serve of HBOline was not enough. I don’t think anyone would like that. Player is the prerequisite for all kinds of things? Moreover your serve of HBOline was usually cutting. How could that be!? It made the role died when your serve was abnormal! May be you wanted to help you earn more money? It is nothing more than a scam! I just could not believe what I thought. Another sight was some player used the helper to help them improve level. How ridiculous it was? Both of that, I think is a disgrace to our Hong Kong online game representation! This is the worst online game that I have been seeing in my life.
It is high time you improved your service. We demand that you give us a refund! In my view, your company should take a prompt action to improve your services; otherwise, it will risk a great loss of player. And I trust your company will take appropriate actions!? We hope such matter will not happen again and we will not have any more complaint to your company.
Yours faithfully,
Player
回樓主:
第二段可以分開多幾段寫
First,we found that the serve of HBOline was not enough.
Second,we found that some player used the helper to help them improve level.
Third,(...)<--自己諗~"~
基本上我都睇得明你想表達d咩,不過第二段睇到我有小小眼花
如果唔想好似我建議咁改,就請你唔好要第二段果個First=)作者: CDD 時間: 2009-8-15 16:46:53 標題: 回覆 19樓 心霜乂碎 的帖子
